You kind of put that obvious cartoon feel in your voice, which is a pet peeve of mine. Usually with comedy you should persue stuff however you want to represent the joke, but the- "Oh, yay! I'm getting ready for work" kind of shebang was a little bit too off-sounding, and not natural. However, the "did you say... girl scout cookies?" I fucking laughed so hard. I thought of the camrea panning in on him really fast and the "girl scout cookies" to be loud and distorted. However, I liked this. Good voice acting.
I really appreciate the input. Normally when I do stupid little sketch things like this I go for over exaggeration but I get what you're saying. Thanks for the criticism! :)
Even though it's butchered, even the animals could behold it's beauty.
I salute you, @yetanotherjohn
This is the tune that the soldiers sing after a victory.
Hail, mein fuhrer @Bit.
Thanks. I'm glad that you like it.
As the children say before they're tucked in, "Can I hear a story?"
And this story will live on in childrens ears forever.
As supergandhi64 once said, -very- avant garde.
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